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A Diary

来源:     文章作者:     2012年01月17日 05:00:04

  A Diary

  Monday May 12 Rainy

  We were having a class when our classroom began to shake terribly. At first I didn''t realize what was happening. I only heard my teacher shouting loudly: "Earthquake! Earthquake! Run!         Run!  " All the students began to run, but it was too late. The whole True love is giving, not taking building was in ruins in a few seconds. Only some of us were able to get out of the building.

  On the way we met other people who were running for their lives. It was raining hard and the mountains were running down stones!  What was worse, the earth was still shaking terribly. Perhaps you couldn''t imagine what danger we were in. But we stayed very strong and united!  Men helped women, grown-ups helped children, and the stronger helped the weaker.

  Luckily, after we had run for hours, the PLA men used helicopters to pick us up and carry us to safe place. We gave our thanks to the PLA men!

  1.At first I didn''t realize what was happening.

  起先我没有意识到发生了什么事。

  这是由what引导的名词性从句作realize的宾语。

  2.Perhaps you couldn''t imagine what danger we were in.

  也许你不能想象我们身处何种险境。

  这是由what引导的名词性从句作1maglne的宾语,注意这个从句并非疑问句,从句中语序要用陈述句语序。

  shake /fek/v摇晃

  realize /''ria*laiz/u意识到

  united /ju''naitid/ adj,团结的

  helicopter /''hehka:pta-/".直升飞机

  terribly /''t£rabIU adv,厉害地

  imagine/I''med3in/¨想象

  PLA胛。中国人民解放军

  in rums毁坏

  这篇日记的基本结构是开端、发展、高潮与结尾。日记首先交代了发生了什么事,重点在发展和高潮部分,作者赞扬J,人们存危难中团结一致、互相帮助的精神,日记结尾作者同大家都被安置到了安全的地方。文章要点齐全,语句通顺,人称、时态把握较好,可以看出一定的基本功。

  日记一则

  5月12日  星期一  雨

  我们正在上课,忽然间教室开始剧烈地摇晃。一开始我并没有意识到发生了什么事。我只是听到老师大叫:“地震了!地震了!快跑!快跑”所有的学生都开始逃跑,但已经太迟了。整幢楼房在眨眼间变成一堆废墟,我们中只有一部分人逃了出来。

  在路上我们碰到了其他逃生的人们。雨下得很大,山上不停地有石头滚下来,更糟糕的是,大地仍然摇晃得厉害。也许你无法想象我们所处的险境,但是我们表现得很坚强很团结!男人帮助女人,大人帮助孩子,强者帮助弱者。

  幸运地是,我们跑了几个钟头后,中国人民解放军架着直升飞机将我们送到了安全的地方。多谢中国人民解放军。

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